Wrote a poem, tell me what you think?

very good writing! i enjoy the slightly vague representation of the emotion conveyed in the poem. near the beginning, however, one the line that says 'encomped in it', perhaps you should say 'encomped within'. it sounds slightly more professional, and makes a more specific message as to exactly what you are referring too. also, on lines such as 'i am gone' and 'less explored area', you may want to make those into metaphorical phrases, to make your entire poem sound more polished and deep. easy to understand, but very deep poem. very realistic and emotional. i love your writing, hope this helps!